Wednesday, September 26, 2007

Crows

Another new poem:

Four crows in a bare tree

glimpsed briefly
as the train hurtles past
a field cleared by bulldozers
little hills of dirt and rubble piles
and clumps of weeds poking up
here and there remarkable
how much one takes in while
speeding past a last look back
and the crows still perch
unmoved

September 19, 2007

1 Comments:

Blogger Jim H. said...

Nice.

I'm a fan of Richard Brautigan, so any poem about crows reminds of his poem "Nine Crows, Two Out of Sequence," which goes:

1,2,3,4,5,7,6,8,9

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Keep writing!

11:12 AM  

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