Yes, I was there!
I hope to be able to share some reflections on my experience attending the Inauguration, but I'm still collecting my thoughts, not to mention trying to re-establish what passes for my normal life. In the meantime, here's an old poem I stumbled on while gathering some others for submitting to various journals. I had completely forgotten about it and had never shown it to anyone. I made some revisions and then submitted it to Naomi's keen eye. The final result:
To the Woman on the Bus I thought I’d seen
you here before when
you sat down across
from me you caught
my eyes and smiled
before looking
away you seemed
as distant as I felt yet
when our eyes met
again you smiled
again you twice softly
blessed the sneezing woman
sitting beside me.
I got off before you
and haven’t seen you since.
7 Comments:
I have a very similar experience, but it involved a young man on the subway in the 80's in NYC. Great poem. I love your style. Please come help us name the garage gargoyle in my latest ~ Chlorista
I like your poem. And I hope to read your reflections on the Inauguration. I enjoyed Elizabeth Alexander's Inaugural poem. What did you think?
Thanks to you both!
Chlorista: I'm on the way!
Fitz: I liked the way she read and I thought it had some excellent images.
Wow. That's beautiful.
I also really love your pic of the jumbo tron. It feels like an historic moment, captured for posterity. Thank you!
Thank YOU, Reya!
I'd be delighted. My friend lives on 12th. No dog, but an adorable little girl named Analia. Oh yes, my friend is Lisa. familiar?
Will you send me an email so we can figure out a convenient time to meet?
Also will you delete my comment with my email address? Thanks.
Looking forward to it.
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